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This is my first pitch, Starfisher. This idea appeals to me as it is set in a post-apocalyptic mining and seaside town. It has a unique setting.

I don't like this idea, as it feels confusing as multiple ideas competeing with each other.

I later decided on develop a different pitch for another idea as the Digital Ghost idea wasn't appealing to work on.

Reflective Statement

I wish I had a clear focus on my chosen ideas. Developing a captivating pitch to sell the ideas to the class was a struggle. What I can do in the future is to ask for more feedback and continue to flesh out more with the pitches. Another thing I could improve on is to make my characters more three-dimensional, as I feel that they are flat to convey what type of character they are, as I was more focused on developing the plot than the characters. In addition, I could create more style frames to flesh out the world and the characters for all the stories I created further. That would have given me more direction for the visuals and helped me to have a concrete plan of where to go next with the world and characters. Another point I can improve is my time management. Creating a schedule would have greatly improved my amount of work and could have added more to my work.

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